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If you make the flaming trail from the ship longer and have some bit and parts coming out from it, its might show the speed of decent better. Take reference from space shuttle explosion or satellite breaking up in atmosphere, it usually will show secondary explosion. But still, it really depend on how you want to depict the image.
I might populate more ship derelicts to better show the mood that this place is a death trap.
Just something extra, I like how you show the sharp edges at the center, maybe if you can both side pointing at each other... something like a gaping jaw opening up at the ship above, it might have a more threatening feel. Something like the old Jaw movie poster.
Having said it, I think this is really a good piece. Keep more coming man~
Very good work.